Monday 23 March 2015

Our writing about Luigi



Luigi came for a visit.  Luigi is cool.  Luigi is at school.  He has a treat.


By Ivan


Luigi came to school.  He came to me today.  Luigi came to hub 5.  Luigi flew.  Luigi is black and white and blue and grey.  He sounds like a squeaky.  He is going up and down his stick.


By Cobie


Yesterday Luigi came to Hub 5.  Luigi chirped in his cage.  He ate his food.  I like Luigi because he is blue.  


By Mikayla


Luigi came yesterday to Hub 5.  We sat in a circle.  He jumped in his cage.   


By Zara


Luigi came to school because Mrs Freddy wanted us to meet him.  Mrs Freddy took Luigi around the room.  He was very cute.  Luigi jumped to his traffic light.  Luigi made sure his feathers were in the right place.  Luigi is special because he is as blue as the sky. Luigi sounds like a singing bird.  Luigi looks like a baby bird.  But Luigi is not a baby bird he is a teenager bird.


By Mishara


Luigi sounds like a squeaky toy.  Luigi is black white blue and grey.  He is special because of his colour.  Luigi is cleaning himself.


By Anton


Luigi came to school and he came today.  Mrs Freddy wanted us to meet him because she thought that we might be glad.  He was in Hub 5 / 6.  He was jumping in his cage.  He was swinging.  He is a boy because Mrs Freddy said.  Luigi is as blue as the sea.  He is singing so sweetly.  His colour is special.  He is special because he can fly.  He has a treat and a sharp beak.


By Lucy


Luigi was flying and he was jumping around in his cage.  He is cute because he is blue.  He was walking side to side.  Luigi is black white blue and grey.  He has wings to fly.  Luigi uses his swing to sharpen his nails.  He is as blue as the sky.  Luigi is blue like my Stonefields top.

By Jack M

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